Friday, October 26, 2007

Making a Comeback...

Opening scene...
You see matt and eric sitting at standing around a pool table. Talking.
Just talking about mundane stuff and then it blends into talk about his girlfriend...
Matt: Im just glad to be out and away man, did i tell you what she did the other night?
Eric: Yeah you told me about it, man i dont know what to tell you... She just always kind of been like that. Thats her idea of fun...to not fuckin remember anything..
Matt: Well i like her and everything but it just gets old...i dunno man, i just want my beer and to play some pool
Eric: too bad your not going to win though huh
Matt: yeah whatever (cell phone grabs his attention [buzzes])
He grabs his cell phone and looks at it
He then looks up with an exasperated look
Matt: So uh, melissa just got pulled over...
Eric: Great, again...shes such an idiot. So whats happening?
Matt: i dunno, thats all she said, i guess we're gonna find out later though.

Cut to a scene where matt just took a shot but then his cell phone rings. Now its Melissa on the phone, upset and crying.
Matt deals with it in a calm, irritated manner...then he hangs up.

Matt: Dude we have to leave, the cop told her to get a ride home or shes goin to jail. So we have to go pick her and her car up..
Eric: Dame dude....alright...

Cut to a scene where theyre walking out of the bar talking...
Eric: Dude ive been drinking and were gonna go pick her up from a cop?
Matt: its cool man, we werent there long...he wont notice at all, just be cool.
Eric: Alright dude...lets hope everything goes according to plan...

The next scene will be us arriving at the scene... The cop and Melissa are standing outside of her car talking. Blue lights flashing behind.

Cop: How are yal doin tonight?
Both: Good
Eric: hopin everythings alright
Cop: Oh we're fine she just doesnt need to be out on the road...
Melissa: I wait on him at Mulligan's
Cop: Yeah i know she means well so thats why i decided to give her a chance, we were about to pack up and go downtown...
Matt: Yeah sorry about that, we had to fight our way through the traffic...
Cop: Well we dont want any hurry, dont want anyone gettin hurt. So are yal ok to go?

This is where i can have a number of responses, we just said yeah and went on our way...

Yessir: he lets us go, we drop her off, and go back out
Are we ok to go?: he gets a little suspicious, nothing much, it just gets a little tense...
I hope so: 'what do you mean i hope so?', this is where we could end up riding downtown with melissa.
Oh yeah, how about you?: This is where we may have made a new friend and he ends up goin out with us...

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